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just 22 and i dont mind dying

Thu Sep 24, 2009, 8:25 AM
im getting old,
but feeling better.
here is something i wrote awhile back.

its just a bottle of whiskey
untouched inbetween them
wading with a lonesome
so warm

and the burn that goes down
like the sun in a ghost town
is overcome by the wiskey
exhale

day falls and the fire still burns
crackling and dancing
to a rhythm ive never heard
before.
-

yeah it feels unfinished
and feel like a song but whatever.
take care.

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  • Mood: Sarcastic
  • Listening to: worth the time - Shep and Me
  • Reading: some william carlos williams
  • Watching: easy rider
  • Playing: hopeless romantic :/
  • Eating: toast
  • Drinking: White Zinfandel

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:iconpcholka:
~Pcholka Sep 24, 2009, 12:42:47 PM
:floating:

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always coming second best!:heart:
:iconwomanofthepage:
*WomanOfThePage Sep 24, 2009, 2:30:47 PM
Exceptional! Hope you start writing more now that you are 22 :)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 24, 2009, 5:10:52 PM
:)
lets hope darling

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrobidoux:
=robidoux Sep 25, 2009, 6:39:52 PM
I missed your birthday?

Just 22.
That was a fabulous year for me. :heart: I hope it will be for you too.

Even unfinished ... anything from you is great.
I think I'm gonna take a picture or write a poem tomorrow - just for you.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 25, 2009, 7:47:12 PM
yeah, it was the 12th.
i hope it will be just as great for me as it was for you :)

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icongroovycamel:
~groovycamel Sep 26, 2009, 10:00:34 AM
you comming to england?

--
For love and for hate
I swat a fly and offer it
to an ant - Masaoka Shiki
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 27, 2009, 10:22:58 AM
i wish.
buy me a ticket :)

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icontuishimi:
=Tuishimi Oct 1, 2009, 5:23:41 AM
Happy b-day! :) I'll be honest, the only thing I liked about being 22 was that I was a pretty good basketball player and I would play all afternoon long. Other than that... feh. I could take it or leave it. :)

--
...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Oct 1, 2009, 10:39:24 AM
man id love to play basketball again with someone, im always up for it but hardly anyone seems active in my group of frineds haha.
plus its getting cold out so that doesnt help.

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
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