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a corner child
rattled, and hesitant
shouts
         “ for you to be what I cannot
            is to be, see, you & not me
           flee!
      slave me, slap me, beat me & kill me
            Mr. Bee
            none of these
                 he cannot. Will not.                 (Verbal slipknot?)
                                              never….”

he sat down. recollected himself. and continued crying.
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
:iconrider-on-the-storm:

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What the hell....am i talking.........about?? ?? ??
///whoa dude\\\ dont ask...



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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
whoa...how crazy. I think Ill say thats where i got it from

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconthe-last-mowgli:
i like how its out of order and is random, its sweet

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May The Force Be With You:jedi:
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Thank you :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconphr3ak000000000:
:wow: i felt like i was sliding down an ice-capped mountain, unable to stop! lol, the flow and pace was amazing and perfectly messy, as emotion is. wonderful work. i was completely engaged :heart:

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I sacrifice every breath I breathe, to make you believe
~Aquemini

Save the alien
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
your so kind. I always look forward to reading your comments.
:heart: you :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icontuishimi:
No doubt this one means different things to different people. Plays very well on the emotions. I got a little "knot" inside of me when I read it.

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...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Ahhh you clever dog, you :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrabid-squirrel:
damn. amazing word choices..

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bobby dylan.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Thank you :)
..sorry i didnt call you back. I (at the moment) couldnt remember
Ill call you probably soon.

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)

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