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Categories Literature > Poetry > Family Life > Open


a corner child
rattled, and hesitant
shouts
         “ for you to be what I cannot
            is to be, see, you & not me
           flee!
      slave me, slap me, beat me & kill me
            Mr. Bee
            none of these
                 he cannot. Will not.                 (Verbal slipknot?)
                                              never….”

he sat down. recollected himself. and continued crying.
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
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What the hell....am i talking.........about?? ?? ??
///whoa dude\\\ dont ask...



ee inspired

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~PastParadise Oct 9, 2005, 9:18:41 AM
You know when you sit down at a birthday party, and you get a piece of cake, and it ends up being so good that all you can think about afterwards is another piece?

Yeah... Hence the poem. :heart:

--
Je suis défectueux et content.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Oct 9, 2005, 10:20:52 AM
aww thank you

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icongroovycamel:
~groovycamel Oct 9, 2005, 11:19:35 AM
Like a childs emotions forming into a tornado...I like it. And the lay out is interesting too =)

--
Man is an animal.
But he is an animal which embodies God.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Oct 9, 2005, 11:54:08 AM
why thank you

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconyearningtofly:
~yearningtofly Oct 9, 2005, 5:16:08 PM
ee inspired huh? way to go man...?

it is extremely good though! i like it alot!

i missed your poems man. glad to see you haven't changed...well too much anyway!! :hug:

--
Poppies bleed petals of sheer excess. You and I, this sweet battleground.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Oct 9, 2005, 6:26:42 PM
thanks and for the fav aswell.
When are you and I going to party

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconsoftcell72:
~softcell72 Oct 9, 2005, 9:24:37 PM
oddly, this reminded me of a man I saw the other day..I guess he was a hobo of sorts, and I know he was mentally ill. but he was sitting quietly, then out of nowhere he'd get up and go into these...rants.. and then after awhile He'd just kind of fade right back into himself.

--
change is good, you go first.
Light travels faster than sound, which is why a person can appear bright, until they open their mouth.
hating me won't make you pretty.
:icondeliriously-dying:
~deliriously-dying Oct 9, 2005, 10:14:53 PM
mrar i haven't talked to you in awhile. i see you're still amazing. hate. :XD:

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under the water,
you left me drowning.
:iconyearningtofly:
~yearningtofly Oct 10, 2005, 7:43:14 AM
you're welcome hun :heart:


i dont know when we can party together...i won't be home now for a while...but you can always come visit me!!

--
Poppies bleed petals of sheer excess. You and I, this sweet battleground.
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