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Did you find solace
between the sheets of personality,
while confined in the direction of ruins?

Desolate
we wanderers of comfort and place.

Leaving my psyche
              this transient portrait that befalls you,
Distant opal reverie.

Memory begins with a whiplash
and you find yourself confused, confronting
              Poise - something heavy
A linear escape from bereavement and glut,
exposure,
the truth - the fear.
First lick at hopelessness.

All hoary truthful words entrap and disguise
the affect for feeling
like the piercing red sound of going blind,
             back in the pupil black depths,
with an alarming echo that resonates and disturbs.
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there was preserved
in her
the fresh miracle
of
suprise.

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:iconwomanofthepage:
Absolutely amazing! Very glad to see that you are writing...even if you look over older writings and post them or re-do that still keeps your "chops" in tune (an old phrase from my music days :) You have a gift my friend don't ignore it.
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This one feels a little on edge.

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...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconthestrangercalledjim:
good work my friend...

as if you've found the end of the world of your emotions and are determined to walk off it :D

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'I am a robot, I am the undead, I am the oldest living example of my kind'

'I am ZombieFucker'
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im not worthy of giving an advanced critique but listen to me - ive always told you that you are .... damn, so so talented. keep sculpting your words.

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