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Of desires and daydreams by ~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


    She measured his wants-

His vulnerable heart crumbles
      with an ensemble of woes
               softly in the background
solemnly sends his broken self
                    into the void.

Dearest eclipse, oh familiar gleam
                                         high above
subtle in presence
but miserable in company
         this is no sanctuary, no beautiful retreat
from reminiscence or love;
                    this is a torture hole
a certain crater that parallels in grief
   my reflection.

                     And now I drift
                  inside a sole reality.
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:icondeliriously-dying:
~deliriously-dying Feb 23, 2009, 11:47:21 PM
I miss your writing.

--
under the water,
you left me drowning.
:iconrobidoux:
=robidoux Feb 24, 2009, 6:36:51 PM
i dont know what to say yet
other than
i miss your writing too
its a high
for a drug free girl

ensemble of woes *sigh*
:iconbeforenow:
~beforenow Feb 24, 2009, 8:11:36 PM
i told you this already but now i got to read it not in a noisy basement and I like it a whole lot more than I did yesterday. I too miss your writing. and you.

--
who the hell knows anymore?
:icontuishimi:
=Tuishimi Feb 25, 2009, 6:51:28 AM
I love reading your stuff out loud. I can hear my own voice change with the words... whether I mean to or not.

--
...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:icongroovycamel:
~groovycamel Feb 25, 2009, 1:18:41 PM
your poetry never ceases to amaze me =)

--
For love and for hate
I swat a fly and offer it
to an ant - Masaoka Shiki
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Feb 25, 2009, 4:21:50 PM
:)
me too..

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Feb 25, 2009, 4:24:05 PM
thank you.
i figured people wouldnt enjoy
reading a sad poem,
i dont even feel that way
anymore.
again
thanks luv

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Feb 25, 2009, 4:28:29 PM
i miss you, too
it was good to see you
and just hang out with you.

thank you, boots

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Mood: Optimism ~rider-on-the-storm Feb 25, 2009, 4:35:24 PM
:D
thats interesting
i always have to read poems
out loud, i dont know why
but i think its because i hear them differently.

thank you old friend,
thank you.

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
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