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half her face shows glamour tonight
pure eminence pearl
gleaming four mystic path’s
offering her gift
  --- the phone rings
abruptly
she’s calling for our attention
wanting it now
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
:iconrider-on-the-storm:

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read it.
comment about it...if you want.

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:iconphr3ak000000000:
mmmm. very sensual... and mysterious.

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:iconthe-last-mowgli:
cool, but i dont really get it (maybe im stupid)

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May The Force Be With You:jedi:
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
hmm...its about the moon. haha

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thank ya :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconyearningtofly:
I like it, a lot. It's deep...and I'm dumb, so I don't get it really either. However, I think that it is cool that you have that effect on people...make them think. It's super.

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Poppies bleed petals of sheer excess. You and I, this sweet battleground.
:iconchelsea-belle-06:
i like it
but maybe people are confused because when you think of the moon you think of a guy.. like.. the man in the moon and stuff.. i dont know.. justa thought
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Its funny to read peoples comments who dont understand or get my poems...
oh the irony...

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
possibly...
glad you like it

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconchelsea-belle-06:
wow.. did i actually comment on one of your poems??!!!!! imagine that.. :D

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