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Gentle Maenad by ~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm:

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                 :Gentle Maenad:




         Arising from a mysterious realm
                   She flew to me
                 Abandoning reality

                Wild and crazy girl
            Roaming thru day dreams
              Flirting with madness,
            Fell victim to purple trance

                 Raving for her deity
                   In ecstatic frenzy
              Chased me, hunted me
              In this concrete wasteland

                 Goddess of wonder
                 Scratching the earth
                     Stream of wine
        Found me, hiding beneath the vine

        Pounces me
        Sensuality begins
        Whisper’s “everything will be fine”
        Pure ecstasy
                 My radiant belle
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
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The break of spring was a blast...
...more tales to tell you all!


...not so sure about this one...tell me your thoughts please
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~hobobill:iconhobobill: Mar 28, 2005, 4:08:11 AM
Great poem:)
:+fav:
Love ur name:)
I love the Doors one of my fav bands
~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm: Mar 28, 2005, 7:09:11 AM
Thank you so much, The Doors are my favorite band!
haha you are ten times cooler since you like the doors ;)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
~avauntphotos:iconavauntphotos: Mar 28, 2005, 8:27:47 AM
i dig the last verse very much! great poem
~deliriously-dying:icondeliriously-dying: Mar 28, 2005, 1:25:02 PM
gorgeous, sweety!!!

Wild and crazy girl/Roaming thru day dreams/Flirting with madness,/Fell victim to purple trance <------ ultimate favorite part!!! you were secretly thinking about me weren't you... :D hehe, jk. but still.. awesome!! :glomp:

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under the water,
you left me drowning.
~chelsea-belle-06:iconchelsea-belle-06: Mar 28, 2005, 4:10:19 PM
i love it!! whos it about?? hmm...
~Beautifully-Broken:iconBeautifully-Broken: Mar 28, 2005, 6:56:16 PM
Ooh it's utterly beautiful!! Well Done!! Definately Favourite!

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If i'm dead an hour from now, i'd sure regret not have'n eat'n a lot of peanuts before the lights went out. I love peanuts.
:headbang:

GIVE ME ANOTHER ONE! GIVE ME ANOTHER ANIMAL!!
~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm: Mar 28, 2005, 9:23:29 PM
Thank you so much!

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm: Mar 28, 2005, 9:24:25 PM
your the best

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm: Mar 28, 2005, 9:25:30 PM
Those lines were ment for you, of course ;)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
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