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Delicate Rhapsodies by ~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


together we tongue
& lather through whispers
& difficult answers
in spotless dreams
being carried away
by delicious rapture

glowing ornament full of glee
tasting thoughts with cloudy flavor
& chasing the crazy children of dawn
watch as they flow thru my hair
hushed their movement, unannounced
unaware

in the pleasing morning tide
my muse hums delicate rhapsodies
   quietly in my ear

rest now, my beloved
fall upon ebony clouds
& ride the spiral down
                                   down
                                              down
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
:iconrider-on-the-storm:

Author's Comments

being intoxicated rules..got the first half of it during my escape.
LEEEEECH

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:iconxcatchmyfallx:
~xCatchMyFallx Aug 23, 2005, 4:35:14 AM
you have a unique style when it comes to writing, and that's what makes them so good :)
:iconbeforenow:
~beforenow Sep 21, 2005, 12:25:27 PM
holy shit.........
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Sep 21, 2005, 12:31:16 PM
uh...thank you?

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconxxleeshaxx:
~XxLeeshaxX Oct 4, 2005, 5:38:46 AM
No! Even though at one point I thought I was going to die :O_o: hehehe.
Just kidding. And your welcome.... Im a very honest person... even though people don't always like it at times ;)

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Oh, my long lost gallery will never be found.
:iconmalrose:
~malrose Nov 6, 2005, 9:06:53 AM
*frantically searches for 'add to favs' button*

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"Together we will rape the English language."
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Nov 6, 2005, 4:06:04 PM
Hey thank you for the fav. I appreciate it very much, yep yep yep
And for the fav on lady salvation. :D

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconstrawberrysnog:
~strawberrysnog Nov 28, 2005, 5:28:26 PM
It's very sweet and sensual - I particularily enjoyed the final three lines - also the running through the hair bit - very lyrical

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"Sometimes we laugh because it hurts less than crying, and sometimes we cry from laughing too much."
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Nov 29, 2005, 2:23:31 PM
thank you

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconxenolax:
~xEnolAx Dec 2, 2005, 5:37:03 PM
ya definatly one of my favs =)

wow i love it. turely!

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nextJennaration Photography
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
~rider-on-the-storm Dec 2, 2005, 9:25:17 PM
thank you :)

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
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