together we tongue
& lather through whispers
& difficult answers
in spotless dreams
being carried away
by delicious rapture
glowing ornament full of glee
tasting thoughts with cloudy flavor
& chasing the crazy children of dawn
watch as they flow thru my hair
hushed their movement, unannounced
unaware
in the pleasing morning tide
my muse hums delicate rhapsodies
quietly in my ear
rest now, my beloved
fall upon ebony clouds
& ride the spiral down
down
down
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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
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"God is not outside us but is just us, the living and the dead, the never-lived and never-died." Kerouac
"The joy of being human is in uncovering the core we already are, the treasure buried in the ruin…" -Rumi
and so i'm going to be mean and technical and OCD because i love this fricken poem so much.. first in the line "hushed they’re movement" did you mean it to be they are movement or possessive... their movement? i'm thinking you meant the latter so that would need changing... secondly (and basically the same issue) is in the line "my muse hum’s delicate rhapsodies". it would just be hums you know.. without the apostrophe.
rargh. i feel so crazyanalyticalgross (yes that is all ONE word).... but this is SO GOOD, jd omg. i hate seeing it ruined by even the smallest, most insignificant of errors.
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under the water,
you left me drowning.
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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
<Notice how I havent been on in forever? I've had a few days.>
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Oh, my long lost gallery will never be found.
<Notice how I havent been on in forever? I've had a few days. I've missed you're work!>
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Oh, my long lost gallery will never be found.
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If i'm dead an hour from now, i'd sure regret not have'n eat'n a lot of peanuts before the lights went out. I love peanuts.
GIVE ME ANOTHER ONE! GIVE ME ANOTHER ANIMAL!!
you rock
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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
--
If i'm dead an hour from now, i'd sure regret not have'n eat'n a lot of peanuts before the lights went out. I love peanuts.
GIVE ME ANOTHER ONE! GIVE ME ANOTHER ANIMAL!!