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together we tongue
& lather through whispers
& difficult answers
in spotless dreams
being carried away
by delicious rapture

glowing ornament full of glee
tasting thoughts with cloudy flavor
& chasing the crazy children of dawn
watch as they flow thru my hair
hushed their movement, unannounced
unaware

in the pleasing morning tide
my muse hums delicate rhapsodies
   quietly in my ear

rest now, my beloved
fall upon ebony clouds
& ride the spiral down
                                   down
                                              down
©2005-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
:iconrider-on-the-storm:

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being intoxicated rules..got the first half of it during my escape.
LEEEEECH

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:iconpastparadise:
Mmmm -
there's an undertone of all the dark games I used to play as a child...
... i like it =)

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Je suis défectueux et content.
:iconredheadedromeo:
I really like this i can feel the emotion

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"God is not outside us but is just us, the living and the dead, the never-lived and never-died." Kerouac

"The joy of being human is in uncovering the core we already are, the treasure buried in the ruin…" -Rumi
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thank you! i was hopeing people could

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thank you :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
Thank you! and thanks for the fav!

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
haah thank you chels

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
I cant wait!

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thanks friend. I appreciate it :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:icondutchshun:
Wonderful poem, the words flow & interact really well
Very creative ~ & interesting combinations, that makes one think


in the pleasing morning tide
my muse hum’s delicate rhapsodies
quietly in my ear

~ I love these lines, they have a real happy peaceful feel about it

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wishing well
coins desire
dreams ripple

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