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A thousand wishes slurred... by ~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm:



A thousand wishes slurred
but this moment and influence
placed together
vanished quietly to power
                      during smashed vision  
& bitter you.
Imagine
           a delicate diamond reverie experience
           like a desolate euphoria, watching
           a montage of clouds pass you by
shining and telling your mind
           to please the splendor of this raw moment.
cherish this rare sight for hugs and sore good-bye’s
  for it
                  will be
the cure
          for the refugee
          found against a conversation
                             & a solemn kiss.

                one was to be missed
the other
forgotten.
©2006-2009 ~rider-on-the-storm
:iconrider-on-the-storm:

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an event from my past...

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:iconpoeticwonder:
You already know my opinion on this. :)
:iconchelsea-belle-06:
i really like this a whole lot!
i cant explain why.. i just really do.. you have a way with words
:iconbiggdl76:
damn fool... i like it, a lot. im guessing its about you being drunk sometime. anyway, it doesn't matter cause it is still a sweet ass poem... :+fav:

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So what...I'm fat...I'm gay too...You got a problem with it?
:iconlifereallysux:
i enjoy it very much, nice

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"You can close your eyes to things
you don't want to see,
but you cant close your heart
to things you don't want to feel."
:icondeliriously-dying:
brain... give... now.... :shakefist:

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under the water,
you left me drowning.
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
:) thanks again

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thanks man!
and thank you for your favorite

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thanks chels :peace:

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thanks man
you rock :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)

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